Rising Creek by StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecordsSong: Rising CreekReviewer: Randall MarkPositive Comments: The nice, clean strumming of the acoustic guitar grabbed me right from the start, and really was the solid foundation for this uptempo song. Vocals were sung w…

StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: Rising Creek

Reviewer: Randall Mark

Positive Comments: The nice, clean strumming of the acoustic guitar grabbed me right from the start, and really was the solid foundation for this uptempo song. Vocals were sung well in pitch and delivery. I also liked the palm muting technique on the guitar which worked well with the rhythm. There were a couple unexpected, dramatic pauses which also worked well, particularly contrasting with the quick, bouncy tempo of most parts of the song.

Constructive Comments: I had a hard time comprehending and digesting the lyrics in time. I felt like the lyrics were coming at me really fast (almost felt like the syllables were mirroring the strum heats of the guitar at times) Because of this I had difficulty knowing what the song was really about, at least in real time. Perhaps fewer lyrics that were spread out more slowly could have delivered the message of the song more effectively. There were parts, I think the chorus where the singing was slower tempo and I liked those vocals the most. Good job, keep the music coming!

Fearsome Blues by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Fearsome BluesReviewer: Sam CooperPositive Comments: Nice for a children’s tune.Constructive Comments: Some of the tracks are out of sync. Also, they sound a little sterile. That’s where a good producer could be h…

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Fearsome Blues

Reviewer: Sam Cooper

Positive Comments: Nice for a children’s tune.

Constructive Comments: Some of the tracks are out of sync. Also, they sound a little sterile. That’s where a good producer could be helpful.

Blues Conversation by Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob BirthiselSong: Blues ConversationReviewer: Sam CooperPositive Comments: The entire recording is great! Nice arrangement with a solid showcase for guitar work! The rhythm section arrangement is on it. You’ve got all the bases cov…

Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: Blues Conversation

Reviewer: Sam Cooper

Positive Comments: The entire recording is great! Nice arrangement with a solid showcase for guitar work! The rhythm section arrangement is on it. You’ve got all the bases covered with the organ in there, too. Good stuff, indeed! Want more!

Constructive Comments: It’s a small sniglet, but the vocal track is too clean for my taste. Maybe sing it through a megaphone or a bullet mic?

BEFORE THE WORLD STOPS SPINNIN! by Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatSong: BEFORE THE WORLD STOPS SPINNIN!Reviewer: Sam CooperPositive Comments: Love it! It creates a mood! THAT is what music should do for a guy like me! I’m past trying to be impressed by technical prowess, …

Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: BEFORE THE WORLD STOPS SPINNIN!

Reviewer: Sam Cooper

Positive Comments: Love it! It creates a mood! THAT is what music should do for a guy like me! I’m past trying to be impressed by technical prowess, just gimme a cool tune with some attitude!

Constructive Comments: I wish the vocals weren’t in a little battle to be heard over the rest of the mix. To me, it would be worth revisiting the levels of the mix. You have a musical jewel here!

Adrift by Jeana Potthoff

Broadjam Artist: Jeana PotthoffSong: AdriftReviewer: David JamesPositive Comments: It’s a really beautiful piece and it is packed with emotion. Excellent musicianship. Great sound quality. The string arrangement works really well. Nice change at 1.28. …

Jeana Potthoff

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Adrift

Reviewer: David James

Positive Comments: It’s a really beautiful piece and it is packed with emotion. Excellent musicianship. Great sound quality. The string arrangement works really well. Nice change at 1.28. Worth pitching for relevant opportunities.

Constructive Comments: I marked down the arrangement by a notch because I wondered whether the BPM is a tad too slow? Overall though excellent work. Good luck with it.

Facebook Addict by Randall Mark

Broadjam Artist: Randall MarkSong: Facebook AddictReviewer: David JamesPositive Comments: I love the lyric idea with its tongue-in-cheek yet pertinent message. In fact the lyrics are outstanding. I really like the sentiment. The song is catchy with a s…

Randall Mark

Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Facebook Addict

Reviewer: David James

Positive Comments: I love the lyric idea with its tongue-in-cheek yet pertinent message. In fact the lyrics are outstanding. I really like the sentiment. The song is catchy with a strong hook and a great chorus. The song has a sombre, sinister feel which works really well.

Constructive Comments: I’ve marked down the instrumentation and the arrangement because to me the song screams out for a heavy rock/punk rock style of production, in which that hooky chorus could really contrast with eerie verses. Off topic slightly, I wrote a song (unrecorded) a few years ago called ‘Facebook Emptiness’ so I really relate to the lyrics. I know exactly where you’re coming from lyrically.

In The Forest Soundtrack by Ladee V

Broadjam Artist: Ladee VSong: In The Forest SoundtrackReviewer: Davide SalvanPositive Comments: Very nice strings and percussion!Constructive Comments: The piece is really well done and with good choices in terms of arrangement.

Ladee V

Broadjam Artist: Ladee V
Song: In The Forest Soundtrack

Reviewer: Davide Salvan

Positive Comments: Very nice strings and percussion!

Constructive Comments: The piece is really well done and with good choices in terms of arrangement.

What Kind Of Love (Am I Fallin’ In) by Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob BirthiselSong: What Kind Of Love (Am I Fallin’ In)Reviewer: Bobbe BrownPositive Comments: vocals, instruments, arrangement, all awesome,,great recordingConstructive Comments: wish i would have been present for sessionnot your avera…

Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: What Kind Of Love (Am I Fallin’ In)

Reviewer: Bobbe Brown

Positive Comments: vocals, instruments, arrangement, all awesome,,great recording

Constructive Comments: wish i would have been present for sessionnot your average broadjammers

You look good walking away- ( revised) by amy abernathy

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathySong: You look good walking away- ( revised)Reviewer: Bobbe BrownPositive Comments: will fit right into todays country music formatConstructive Comments: cant say anything that would give improvement to this work

amy abernathy

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: You look good walking away- ( revised)

Reviewer: Bobbe Brown

Positive Comments: will fit right into todays country music format

Constructive Comments: cant say anything that would give improvement to this work

Sweet Katie by Tim Patterson

Broadjam Artist: Tim PattersonSong: Sweet KatieReviewer: Bobbe BrownPositive Comments: i like the way you bridge out after solo to lead back to last chorusConstructive Comments: no critiques here ,

Tim Patterson

Broadjam Artist: Tim Patterson
Song: Sweet Katie

Reviewer: Bobbe Brown

Positive Comments: i like the way you bridge out after solo to lead back to last chorus

Constructive Comments: no critiques here ,