Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Facebook Addict
Reviewer: David James
Positive Comments: I love the lyric idea with its tongue-in-cheek yet pertinent message. In fact the lyrics are outstanding. I really like the sentiment. The song is catchy with a strong hook and a great chorus. The song has a sombre, sinister feel which works really well.
Constructive Comments: I’ve marked down the instrumentation and the arrangement because to me the song screams out for a heavy rock/punk rock style of production, in which that hooky chorus could really contrast with eerie verses. Off topic slightly, I wrote a song (unrecorded) a few years ago called ‘Facebook Emptiness’ so I really relate to the lyrics. I know exactly where you’re coming from lyrically.