Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: Rising Creek
Reviewer: Randall Mark
Positive Comments: The nice, clean strumming of the acoustic guitar grabbed me right from the start, and really was the solid foundation for this uptempo song. Vocals were sung well in pitch and delivery. I also liked the palm muting technique on the guitar which worked well with the rhythm. There were a couple unexpected, dramatic pauses which also worked well, particularly contrasting with the quick, bouncy tempo of most parts of the song.
Constructive Comments: I had a hard time comprehending and digesting the lyrics in time. I felt like the lyrics were coming at me really fast (almost felt like the syllables were mirroring the strum heats of the guitar at times) Because of this I had difficulty knowing what the song was really about, at least in real time. Perhaps fewer lyrics that were spread out more slowly could have delivered the message of the song more effectively. There were parts, I think the chorus where the singing was slower tempo and I liked those vocals the most. Good job, keep the music coming!