Broadjam Peer Song Reviews

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: I Never Thought I’d Ever Feel This Good

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Nice song.

Constructive Comments: I would suggest reworking your lyrics a bit to get away =from the repetitive flow you have at the start of each verse…’So I must say…Now I must say’. There can be a much better way to open each of your verses with something that comes across fresh and original.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: I Never Thought I’d Ever Feel This Good

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Nice song.

Constructive Comments: I would suggest reworking your lyrics a bit to get away =from the repetitive flow you have at the start of each verse…’So I must say…Now I must say’. There can be a much better way to open each of your verses with something that comes across fresh and original.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Dance Hall Of Dreams

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: I really like this song with it’s positive take of love lives on forever. A nice cowboy waltz.

Constructive Comments: I really enjoyed listening to this song. It has a nice flow and message. You could probably tweak a few of the lines a bit to give it more of an honest take. I don’t feel lines like ‘In their spiritual home’ would be a real thought here. Keep looking at your lyrics and find real lines that say something rather than ones that just fill in the space. I hope this makes sense to you. I like the song. It just needs a little work.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Dance Hall Of Dreams

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: I really like this song with it’s positive take of love lives on forever. A nice cowboy waltz.

Constructive Comments: I really enjoyed listening to this song. It has a nice flow and message. You could probably tweak a few of the lines a bit to give it more of an honest take. I don’t feel lines like ‘In their spiritual home’ would be a real thought here. Keep looking at your lyrics and find real lines that say something rather than ones that just fill in the space. I hope this makes sense to you. I like the song. It just needs a little work.

Broadjam Artist: Jim Aitken
Song: Drift Away

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Very nice vocals & harmonies.

Constructive Comments: This song seems to come off a little too personal for a commercial market. The idea of not having your parents and being with another family while dreaming of the real thing would not be a popular topic to the general public and listener. Keep the songs themes a bit more commonplace so the listener can relate.

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: One or Two RB

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Like the overall idea, even though it’s been done a million times.

Constructive Comments: You have a nice start here, but I would try to find a strong chorus that speaks to the listener and then use it in all the appropriate spots for your chorus. Don’t keep using different lyrics for the chorus, people like the repetition in a chorus that they can sing along with and remember. Keep working it!

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: One or Two RB

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Like the overall idea, even though it’s been done a million times.

Constructive Comments: You have a nice start here, but I would try to find a strong chorus that speaks to the listener and then use it in all the appropriate spots for your chorus. Don’t keep using different lyrics for the chorus, people like the repetition in a chorus that they can sing along with and remember. Keep working it!

Broadjam Artist: Jimmy
Song: SENT FROM HEAVEN

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Hard to say much since it’s just a track. But many of the country artists of the 2010’s would do a nice song with this track.

Constructive Comments: This song could use a remix on beefing up the energy of it. It comes off as an uptempo song but leaves you hanging as it goes through without some real foot stomping energy.

Broadjam Artist: Jimmy
Song: SENT FROM HEAVEN

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Hard to say much since it’s just a track. But many of the country artists of the 2010’s would do a nice song with this track.

Constructive Comments: This song could use a remix on beefing up the energy of it. It comes off as an uptempo song but leaves you hanging as it goes through without some real foot stomping energy.

Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: Teaching The New Dog Old Tricks

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: I liked the song theme and approach.

Constructive Comments: Possibly take it back in and add a bit more country instruments… acoustic guitar, fiddle, pedal steel? The idea is good, but needs the right track behind you.