Broadjam Peer Song Reviews

Broadjam Artist: ricky c fowler
Song: picture on my wall

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: The instrumentation is good but the recording is not done well.

Constructive Comments: I would suggest remixing the song to get better levels of the instruments and possibly redoing the vocals so they come out a bit drier and upfront.

Broadjam Artist: ricky c fowler
Song: picture on my wall

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: The instrumentation is good but the recording is not done well.

Constructive Comments: I would suggest remixing the song to get better levels of the instruments and possibly redoing the vocals so they come out a bit drier and upfront.

Broadjam Artist: Jimmy
Song: SHAME

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Really nice vocals. Good guitar textures also.

Constructive Comments: The overall recording is good. I would probably suggest a more recent sounding remix though. The drums are a little dry and your vocals could be mixes to be a little more modern sounding as well. You have a real nice voice that just needs to be mixed to today’s sound. Loved the hook.

Broadjam Artist: Jimmy
Song: SHAME

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Really nice vocals. Good guitar textures also.

Constructive Comments: The overall recording is good. I would probably suggest a more recent sounding remix though. The drums are a little dry and your vocals could be mixes to be a little more modern sounding as well. You have a real nice voice that just needs to be mixed to today’s sound. Loved the hook.

Broadjam Artist: Wayne Ammons
Song: Days Go By

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Good solid vocals on this song. Nice harmonies.

Constructive Comments: This song has a good base to start. I would suggest working a little on the hook ‘Days Go By’ to build it up more. There can be so much more that you can say to build up the punch of the line. Kick around ideas of how you can really bring out the ‘wow’ in the thought of the days going by. Good start though. Let’s make it better!

Broadjam Artist: Wayne Ammons
Song: Days Go By

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Good solid vocals on this song. Nice harmonies.

Constructive Comments: This song has a good base to start. I would suggest working a little on the hook ‘Days Go By’ to build it up more. There can be so much more that you can say to build up the punch of the line. Kick around ideas of how you can really bring out the ‘wow’ in the thought of the days going by. Good start though. Let’s make it better!

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: Pedestal Ron Bates

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Interesting vocals…

Constructive Comments: The overall sound of the song was in need of a good remix. The instruments could be blended much better to give it a warmer feel and the overall levels appear to be too hot and are distorting in various areas of the recording.

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: Pedestal Ron Bates

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Interesting vocals…

Constructive Comments: The overall sound of the song was in need of a good remix. The instruments could be blended much better to give it a warmer feel and the overall levels appear to be too hot and are distorting in various areas of the recording.

Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: Never

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Really nice vocals on this one.

Constructive Comments: I really liked this song. It’s basic guitar approach emphasizes the vocal and the story very well. The pedal steel textures are also a big plus.

Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: Never

Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse

Positive Comments: Really nice vocals on this one.

Constructive Comments: I really liked this song. It’s basic guitar approach emphasizes the vocal and the story very well. The pedal steel textures are also a big plus.