Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Dance Hall Of Dreams
Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse
Positive Comments: I really like this song with it’s positive take of love lives on forever. A nice cowboy waltz.
Constructive Comments: I really enjoyed listening to this song. It has a nice flow and message. You could probably tweak a few of the lines a bit to give it more of an honest take. I don’t feel lines like ‘In their spiritual home’ would be a real thought here. Keep looking at your lyrics and find real lines that say something rather than ones that just fill in the space. I hope this makes sense to you. I like the song. It just needs a little work.