Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: One or Two RB
Reviewer: dolylamby’s posse
Positive Comments: Like the overall idea, even though it’s been done a million times.
Constructive Comments: You have a nice start here, but I would try to find a strong chorus that speaks to the listener and then use it in all the appropriate spots for your chorus. Don’t keep using different lyrics for the chorus, people like the repetition in a chorus that they can sing along with and remember. Keep working it!