Month: January 2021

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: I’m Taking Care Of Me ( Country/full band vocal)

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I love the Clarity of the Story (does the story make sense to a listener who is hearing it for the first time–yes) 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Yes2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes I friend brought up your name.3) Is my melody interesting? This could be a great song if the music was more tailored to a musical hook for the lyric or chorus. 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? No. Needs more of a musical hook.5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? I wanted the music to take me somewhere with a emotional hook just like the lyrics did.

Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? Some what 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? I love the sentiment of the song.8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Hope9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes with a ore musical hook Overall great job

Broadjam Artist: Groove Fondue
Song: Sweet Inspiration

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Somewhat. need more of a storyline not so many general statements. Show me pictures of how sweet she is.2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more?Some what be more specific in your verses. 3) Is my melody interesting? I love the music. Contrast more between the verse and chorus.4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place?Some what

Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? It makes me want to sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? happiness9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Great start to a good song. Just develop the storyline more 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Maybe on the rewrite

Broadjam Artist: Geoff Martin Preston
Song: You Dressed My Heart In Blue

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: really well done. Vocals are top notch. Instrumentals are very blondish. could see this in a bond movie. //love the arrangement.

Constructive Comments: nice tune I really have nothing to add. certainly has great potential.

Broadjam Artist: John van Wicklen
Song: Your Love

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: wow I can’t tell you just how much I enjoyed this song. this hit on all cylinders! Vocals are perfect, instrumentation spot on, lyrically perfect, just a pleasure to listen to.

Constructive Comments: excellent song strictly 5 stars all the way. Obviously this song should and will make it into a film or a few. Reminds me of Raindrops keep falling! Bravo!

Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: Stronger

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I loved the overall feel and message of the song. The story could be stronger with more furniture.

Constructive Comments: In V1 set up your character, context andSetting. Your chorus is the big idea- your hook. And V2 develops your story and big ideas more. Overall great job.

Broadjam Artist: Fulvio Ferrari
Song: Green Soul

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I love this music. It was the piano that moved me.

Constructive Comments: I loved everything about this song especially the way it made me feelGreat music, arrangements and instruments.Great job. I would buy this.

Broadjam Artist: Steven Furr
Song: Keep It Moving

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I enjoyed the music and the arrangements of instruments.

Constructive Comments: I would have given you excellent if the music had blows and highs and taken me with contrast in musical phrasing. Overall great job.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Mothers of Messy Kids, Unite!

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I love this song. I enjoyed the story line. Great job. Great hook.

Constructive Comments: I enjoyed everything about this song lyric , story, music, arrangements. I think this would work well with sync also.

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: IF I DIDN’T HAVE YOU!

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: This song had me dancing from the very start. Would have loved to hear a back story.

Constructive Comments: In V1 sets up the character, context and setting. Ch is payoff with the big idea the hook.V2 develop your story line more.Overall enjoyed the music. Great job.

Broadjam Artist: Chris Landi
Song: Shades of Blue

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I love the music. The guitar is fire.

Constructive Comments: I love the music and the arrangements of the song. Have you thought of top lining this track.