Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: I’m Taking Care Of Me ( Country/full band vocal)
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: I love the Clarity of the Story (does the story make sense to a listener who is hearing it for the first time–yes) 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Yes2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes I friend brought up your name.3) Is my melody interesting? This could be a great song if the music was more tailored to a musical hook for the lyric or chorus. 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? No. Needs more of a musical hook.5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? I wanted the music to take me somewhere with a emotional hook just like the lyrics did.
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? Some what 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? I love the sentiment of the song.8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Hope9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes with a ore musical hook Overall great job