Month: January 2021

Broadjam Artist: Dallas Marshall
Song: Little Southern Girl – with beats

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I love the music to this. Please give more details of why you want a southern girl. Contrast the chorus and verse more musically.What story can you tell in pictures that will keep me listening.

Constructive Comments: What does your song map look like?In V1 I need the characters, context and setting established. Your hook is good and goes great with the music. You have the beginning of a great song.

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Keep Me Warm (ft. Jerry Peterson)

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: HiI love the music but I wanted a story line to follow your wonderful music. Take me some where with contrast between chorus and verse musically. You can do that with a lyrical hook or a melodic hook. Great start to a beautiful song. Keep writing. Happy writing Schantell–Redlady

Constructive Comments: HiI love the music but I wanted a story line to follow your wonderful music. Take me some where with contrast between chorus and verse. You can do that with a lyrical hook or a melodic hook. Great start to a beautiful song. Keep writing. Happy writing Schantell–Redlady