Month: February 2021

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: The Clock Burned Down

Reviewer: Veteran MC

Positive Comments: You can sing better than me!!!

Constructive Comments: Difficult to judge as not something I normally listen to. Sounded okay and much better than the last review.

Broadjam Artist: Good Advice
Song: O Fortuna

Reviewer: Veteran MC

Positive Comments: Different and certainly unique. Not what I’d listen too normally so difficult to compare.

Constructive Comments: Turn it into a rap, maybe.

Broadjam Artist: John Evans
Song: A Smoky Soho Blues Bar, Probably Midnight

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts-somewhat–I loved the guitar.I wanted this song to take me on a musical journey.. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening notes draw you in and make you want to hear more? Yes 3) Is my melody interesting? Yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my music stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes

Constructive Comments: 6) Is my music easy to listen along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? clap 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Longing 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? yes if it had lyrics to go with that beautiful voice.

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Dora’s Lullaby

Reviewer: 20 Minute Mission

Positive Comments: Beautiful piano piece, can easily see this as the underscore during a sad scene in a movie.

Constructive Comments: A lot of potential for this song. I could see pairing with a lyricist and selling this to an artist for them to sing on.

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Music is my Man

Reviewer: 20 Minute Mission

Positive Comments: Great upbeat country hit. Really strong vocals, she really brings emotion into the song. Well done!

Constructive Comments: Very well constructed, my only complaint is the snare drum sounds a bit “weak”, I would prefer more of a “crack” sound. Which I imagine when played live, would have that type of sound. Overall well done.

Broadjam Artist: Vi: 00110110
Song: Vi: Where do we go from here

Reviewer: Bobby Duane

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Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Dora’s Lullaby

Reviewer: Lawrence K. Bodien

Positive Comments: There is so much to learn from listening to a piece like this. Everything is tight. Dynamics always moving, but you don’t know it. Expression, Kill me dead. Ludwig would like you ver much.

Constructive Comments: It starts, goes somewhere, and ends. We can just sit back and enjoy the trip. A real treat! One more time. It is extreamly tender in its touch.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: I’m In Love Tonight

Reviewer: Shadow Creek

Positive Comments: Great song, vocals needs work, nice contemporary sound

Constructive Comments: Vocals need work, the mix is good and the steel is killin it!!!!

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: YESTERDAY’S NEWS

Reviewer: Shadow Creek

Positive Comments: Love this song! Great country feel and two step sound, I like the melody and the lyrics Great Job!!!

Constructive Comments: No Comment

Broadjam Artist: Lawrence K. Bodien
Song: Tears of the Storm

Reviewer: Shadow Creek

Positive Comments: Great sound, very festive for a holiday song

Constructive Comments: NO comment