BABY PLEASE by Derrick Procell

Broadjam Artist: Derrick ProcellSong: BABY PLEASEReviewer: Fred KimmelPositive Comments: Very cool track, reminiscent of Atlanta Rythm Section. Great stuff!Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Derrick Procell

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: BABY PLEASE

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Very cool track, reminiscent of Atlanta Rythm Section. Great stuff!

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Dirty Daddy by Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren HeinSong: Dirty DaddyReviewer: Fred KimmelPositive Comments: Loe down dirty blues, with a touch of sophistication. Lead singer is on point. I love the bottleneck guitar.Constructive Comments: None I can think of, except WARREN…

Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Dirty Daddy

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Loe down dirty blues, with a touch of sophistication. Lead singer is on point. I love the bottleneck guitar.

Constructive Comments: None I can think of, except WARREN, if you put your NAME on the lyric sheet, it’s no longer an anonymous review.

The Big Banger by Gee Starr

Broadjam Artist: Gee StarrSong: The Big BangerReviewer: Lawrence K. BodienPositive Comments: Me fish otta water here here fear. You got da fa lear.Constructive Comments: Far as I know this is GREAT!!!!

Gee Starr

Broadjam Artist: Gee Starr
Song: The Big Banger

Reviewer: Lawrence K. Bodien

Positive Comments: Me fish otta water here here fear. You got da fa lear.

Constructive Comments: Far as I know this is GREAT!!!!

Where the Sunshines Down Below (Live @ Ft. Lauderdale Song info by Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatSong: Where the Sunshines Down Below (Live @ Ft. Lauderdale Song infoReviewer: Fred KimmelPositive Comments: Excellent live blues track.Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: Where the Sunshines Down Below (Live @ Ft. Lauderdale Song info

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Excellent live blues track.

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Instead by Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029Song: InsteadReviewer: Lawrence K. BodienPositive Comments: Nice, original instrumentation. Vocal pitch on, probably not the easiest line to sing. With that boring line, I really don’t know how to put this, but in a film, …

Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Instead

Reviewer: Lawrence K. Bodien

Positive Comments: Nice, original instrumentation. Vocal pitch on, probably not the easiest line to sing. With that boring line, I really don’t know how to put this, but in a film, its when the actor turns to the audience and talks directly to them. Now the song has taken on another character, something few songs have.

Constructive Comments: This is the way I see it. A cat, a somewhat messed up room, an obviously very tired woman stumbles to the door, opens to Mr. distraught pours forth his story, either a woman listening, or a cartoon of such, repeating and repeating. A picture of a another woman flirting with him then walking off with someone else waving at him. In other words a very, very marketable video. You are not an if. You are a when, and it will be very soon. Think about what you want. Mr. Jonney Cash ” I Hear that train a comin etc. “

soul food by Hartmut Oberdieck

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut OberdieckSong: soul foodReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: I love the music. The guitar is fire. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes …

Hartmut Oberdieck

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: soul food

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: I love the music. The guitar is fire. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I love the music and the arrangements of the song. Have you thought of top lining this track. 6) Is my music easy to listen along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? move 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? fun and catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Chain of Sin Anthony’s Coreys by Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art CoreySong: Chain of Sin Anthony’s CoreysReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocal and the music. I wanted more specific in the verses and the big payoff in the chorus. Did yo…

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Chain of Sin Anthony’s Coreys

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocal and the music. I wanted more specific in the verses and the big payoff in the chorus. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes

Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? somewhat 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? dance 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? longing 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? somewhat 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? yes with more specific lyrics