Month: January 2021

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Instead

Reviewer: Fulvio Ferrari

Positive Comments: Very nice vocal tone! Really interesting timbre. Great melody and I particularly love backing vocals on the hook.Great music!

Constructive Comments: I really enjoyed listening to this song! I don’t have any particular suggestion to improve the result! Very nice job!

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: The Way You Change (ft.CoriAnder & Gus Harrower)

Reviewer: Fulvio Ferrari

Positive Comments: Very elegant song arrangement! A great contrast between the strumming acoustic GTR and the Low bass synth. Very well recorded and produced. Catchy melody and very nice vocal. Overall a great work!

Constructive Comments: I like everything in this song! Therefore I wouldn’t change a note or a mix level! Awesome!

Broadjam Artist: Dooly
Song: SkullTrap

Reviewer: Fulvio Ferrari

Positive Comments: I really enjoyed listening to this song! Modern sounds, great build-up to the drop, awesome arrangement!

Constructive Comments: I like this song so much, that it is kind of hard for me to say something constructive to improve it. Maybe the only thing I would have tried to do to get a more complete feeling of the arrangement, is a little variation or a special section, but the structure itself and the arrangement are so good that I would keep everything as it is! :-)Awesome work!

Broadjam Artist: Shadow Creek
Song: YES I’m Bad

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: The music had me from the first note. I love the gravelly voice.I wanted the lyrics to take me somewhere with the hook. This would be a great song if you developed the hook more musicallyor lyrically.

Constructive Comments: I followed your story line well. I would have liked more contrast between the verse and chorus. In V1 you set up the characters, context and setting. Ch should feature your hook and in V2 develop your story with some word pictures. Great job.

Broadjam Artist: Chris Landi
Song: You Were The One

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: This song had me from the first note. I love the music and the arrangement. The guitar is fire. I wanted to here more of the story your are the one.

Constructive Comments: To take this song to the next level developed the story more in the lyrics. In V1 set up the characters, setting and context. in the chorus give us the payoff with the hook you are the one. and in V2 develop the story more. The music is excellent. Contrast musically between the chorus an lyrics for drawing the listener in more. Great job

Broadjam Artist: Groove Fondue
Song: Groove Fondue

Reviewer: Ante Novaselic

Positive Comments: Man I wish Prince was still alive!! I totally got into this song for a couple of different reason. One being that it reminded me of the late great Prince with a touch of Morris Day and The Time. I really dug the arrangement. Funky and complex. Great little jazzy piano outro. Very cool! If this song came out in the mid 80’s it would have been perfect. Vocal performance was really good. There is a dated sonic quality about this track that appealed to me. Not sure how appealing the youth of 2021 would find it. Most of them don’t even know what the 80’s are. They probably think its a new club somewhere.

Constructive Comments: I liked it a lot. Just don’t know where you could go with it unless you have a time machine DeLorean. Other then that good work. I hope I get to review more by this artist.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Under Her Wing

Reviewer: Jeana Potthoff

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Broadjam Artist: Shadow Creek
Song: Should I listen

Reviewer: GoldMustard

Positive Comments: Really good writing and arrangement!

Constructive Comments: The Recording quality has a ways to go

Broadjam Artist: Gee Starr
Song: The Big Banger

Reviewer: GoldMustard

Positive Comments: The mix and instrumentation/arrangementis really good.

Constructive Comments: The vocal writing and recording quality need work.

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Mashed Potato Pie

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This is the best pandemic song I have heard – hands down. The message is beautiful, easy story to follow. The family picture is warm and engaging and I could almost taste the beef and gravy and mashed potato pie. Could almost feel the grasp of the hand next to mine praying. This is an excellent song that draws the listener right in and keeps me there. Love the guitar. Vocal is clear and honest as it gets. This is a history song. That’s what great folk music is all about. You have taken what we are all going through and expressed it beautifully. BRAVO!

Constructive Comments: I’d love to hear more of your songs!Here is my goodbye corona song. Not as good as yours but it’s what I wrote! Mrs. Katehttps://www.facebook.com/MrsKateCarpenter/videos/441112053750223