YES I’m Bad by Shadow Creek

Broadjam Artist: Shadow CreekSong: YES I’m BadReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: The music had me from the first note. I love the gravelly voice.I wanted the lyrics to take me somewhere with the hook. This would be a great song if you developed th…

Shadow Creek

Broadjam Artist: Shadow Creek
Song: YES I’m Bad

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: The music had me from the first note. I love the gravelly voice.I wanted the lyrics to take me somewhere with the hook. This would be a great song if you developed the hook more musicallyor lyrically.

Constructive Comments: I followed your story line well. I would have liked more contrast between the verse and chorus. In V1 you set up the characters, context and setting. Ch should feature your hook and in V2 develop your story with some word pictures. Great job.