Walkin’ Music Row by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: Walkin’ Music RowReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals, banjo and fiddle. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals, banjo an…

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Walkin’ Music Row

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals, banjo and fiddle. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals, banjo and fiddle. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? fun and catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Few More Miles by Nick Berry

Broadjam Artist: Nick BerrySong: Few More MilesReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and guitar. 1) Does …

Nick Berry

Broadjam Artist: Nick Berry
Song: Few More Miles

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and guitar. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Keep It Moving by Steven Furr

Broadjam Artist: Steven FurrSong: Keep It MovingReviewer: Hartmut OberdieckPositive Comments: I really like the guitar work. Great Playing and tone. The piano is well played. Lot of drive in this piece of music.Constructive Comments: The rest of the in…

Steven Furr

Broadjam Artist: Steven Furr
Song: Keep It Moving

Reviewer: Hartmut Oberdieck

Positive Comments: I really like the guitar work. Great Playing and tone. The piano is well played. Lot of drive in this piece of music.

Constructive Comments: The rest of the instruments are too compact for my taste. The drums are too loud and monotonous. It doesn’t do justice to guitar playing. Work with the mix and vary the drums. Then it would be excellent. But that’s criticism at a high level. You can hear that a real musician is at work. Good luck!

Rainy Night by Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. PateSong: Rainy NightReviewer: DuttzPositive Comments: I am going to like this because i am a guitar nut the zappa esk guitar had a great tone and this the guy can playConstructive Comments: I liked this a lot the only thing i …

Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Rainy Night

Reviewer: Duttz

Positive Comments: I am going to like this because i am a guitar nut the zappa esk guitar had a great tone and this the guy can play

Constructive Comments: I liked this a lot the only thing i though a bit odd was the snare hit in the intro i think a singe hit would have sounded less weird how picky is that sorry

BABY PLEASE by Derrick Procell

Broadjam Artist: Derrick ProcellSong: BABY PLEASEReviewer: DuttzPositive Comments: A great recording the vocalist sounds a cross between michael mc donald and joe cocker if you turned up at a venue and this was on magicConstructive Comments: I would no…

Derrick Procell

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: BABY PLEASE

Reviewer: Duttz

Positive Comments: A great recording the vocalist sounds a cross between michael mc donald and joe cocker if you turned up at a venue and this was on magic

Constructive Comments: I would not change a thing