Month: January 2021

Broadjam Artist: Shadow Creek
Song: YES I’m Bad

Reviewer: Serneka

Positive Comments: Nice song, I like the instrumental part.

Constructive Comments: Vocal can be sharper

Broadjam Artist: Vi: 00110110
Song: Fake news rodeo (Bloody Wednesday Demo)

Reviewer: Phil Ipsan

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Broadjam Artist: Bobby Caputo
Song: What Did I Miss?

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: Very well written even better performed. Excellent vocals, sincere lyrics, and great instrumentation. Could definately see this in a film. I rellay enjoyed the tune!

Constructive Comments: Not much to critique it is a very well written tune. Love the guitar! licks!

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Lukas
Song: I Can Be Your House

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: The sequel to a House is not a home!!!? I loved this song. Really crazy good vocals. Great instrumentation, great arangement really a top notch job with perfect lyrics, and again those vocals! Could very well be a hit certainly an album cut and used in a film

Constructive Comments: Really nothing constructive to say here I’m a big fan. Loved it!!!!!

Broadjam Artist: Geoff Martin Preston
Song: answer me

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: Very well composed song. Vocals are strong, instrumentation is excellent! Very commercial nice changes very memorable.

Constructive Comments: i thought the production was good but the mix could be better vocals did not stand out enough above the music could not get the lyrics down pat. My grading could be a lot better just by fixing that aspect. The singer seems to have a fine voice but again drowded by the music. That being said a very nice effort would love to hear a remix.

Broadjam Artist: Nick Berry
Song: Just The Way They Are

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and guitar. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: When The Devil’s In The Details (demo)

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and guitar.1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that music.–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Forgive me too

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: thank you nice and balanced

Constructive Comments: thank youAll Yours! Catnip

Broadjam Artist: Nick Berry
Song: Few More Miles

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: nice country flavored song old but new sounding somehow!nice recording skills–respect the vu meters always works friend!

Constructive Comments: you’ve got a nice flow–needs some salt and pepper–try an acoustic lead after the second verse–also emodulate on the third or final verse and finish with passion! GHEEZ! What do I know after 50 years in the business!GOOD LUCK! Catnip

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Lukas
Song: He Sways

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: LOVE THIS SOUND OF FLOATING STRINGS IN A LAKE REMINDS ME OF THE BYRDS SPOT ON CSNNASH TOO! VERY NICE EFFORT! CRACK OUT THE CHAMPAGNE ON THIS ONE!

Constructive Comments: GOT EVERYTHING THESE EARS ARE LOOKIN FOR!FLY HIGH AND MIGHTY! CATNIP