Month: January 2021

You Saved Me by CW Mullins

Broadjam Artist: CW MullinsSong: You Saved MeReviewer: Donovan LukasPositive Comments: Very original. Interesting chord changes (unsettling in a good way). The lyrics evoke imagery and compliment the overall eerie atmosphere. Leonard Cohen meets Danny …

CW Mullins

Broadjam Artist: CW Mullins
Song: You Saved Me

Reviewer: Donovan Lukas

Positive Comments: Very original. Interesting chord changes (unsettling in a good way). The lyrics evoke imagery and compliment the overall eerie atmosphere. Leonard Cohen meets Danny Elfman.

Constructive Comments: Whilst I like the phrasing and vocal style, the tone is lacking and could do with some polishing. I also feel the beat is too robotic and requires some manipulation to make it more organic.

Ga Ga (hard rock backing track) by Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren HeinSong: Ga Ga (hard rock backing track)Reviewer: Donovan LukasPositive Comments: I like this track. Some of those guitar riffs and licks are heavenly. Really got that classic rock feel and a bit more at times! 02:19 – 02:34 is…

Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Ga Ga (hard rock backing track)

Reviewer: Donovan Lukas

Positive Comments: I like this track. Some of those guitar riffs and licks are heavenly. Really got that classic rock feel and a bit more at times! 02:19 – 02:34 is wow…. Great work.

Constructive Comments: Would love to hear some of the rhythm guitar work dirtied up. Seems a bit to polished at times (borderline robotic). Same with some of the transitions. At the moment it feels like a solid backing track, but maybe that’s the aim.

You have always had my heart by Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029Song: You have always had my heartReviewer: BigAlbatrossPositive Comments: Sorry, but I played this song 3 times to understand what it is about and to hear the lyrics. Too short at under 1 minute. Doesn’t do anything for me,…

Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: You have always had my heart

Reviewer: BigAlbatross

Positive Comments: Sorry, but I played this song 3 times to understand what it is about and to hear the lyrics. Too short at under 1 minute. Doesn’t do anything for me, Sorry.

Constructive Comments: Vocalist sounds like he ain’t that bad, but such a poor recording to distinguish anything positive from it whatsoever.

You’re All The Song by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: You’re All The SongReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and guitar. 1)…

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: You’re All The Song

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and guitar. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Without You With Me by Nick Berry

Broadjam Artist: Nick BerrySong: Without You With MeReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and piano. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and piano. 1) Doe…

Nick Berry

Broadjam Artist: Nick Berry
Song: Without You With Me

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and piano. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and piano. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after V2 and the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Empire by Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob BentleySong: EmpireReviewer: Gee StarrPositive Comments: Really nice soundtrack work with lead trumpetConstructive Comments: None for today

Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Empire

Reviewer: Gee Starr

Positive Comments: Really nice soundtrack work with lead trumpet

Constructive Comments: None for today