Month: September 2020

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: A Lonely Place To Be Coreys

Reviewer: Mr.Dragonfly

Positive Comments: Beautiful song love the bass and saxophone

Constructive Comments: Vocals could be a bit better

Broadjam Artist: paul sandberg
Song: All You Are

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Has a Bob Dylan sound to it!! Really nice tune, like the vocals and the music has a very pleasant sound to it! It sounds like 80’s type music! Very Commercial and enjoyable tune!! Quite enjoyed the Solo guitar part, great musicianship!! This is a solid composition! Look forward to hearing more tunes from this Artist…………

Constructive Comments: Don’t really have anything to add!!

Broadjam Artist: Michael Centola (20 Minute Mission)
Song: Not Just Coffee

Reviewer: David Watson

Positive Comments: Quentin Tarantino vibe here. Love this

Constructive Comments: Great job!!

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Old Man

Reviewer: David Watson

Positive Comments: Great vocals man!! Nice structure

Constructive Comments: Cant think of any.

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Amends

Reviewer: paul sandberg

Positive Comments: lovely lyrics couched in a nice simple rhythm with some really nice subtle accompaniments – organ adds a nice wash and the strings at the end are a really nice touch.The little inst bridge section is effective as well.The doubled vocals are interesting – a bit different at first, but it surely grows on you.

Constructive Comments: there are several sections where there is supposed to be silence, but you can hear… what, paper rustling or something – on post production mix you should mute those passages.At 1:35 you popped the P on People and from that point on the use of a De-esseser would really help as those nasty SSS are far too prevalent.a really nice heartfelt track that with a bit of production polishing will really stand out.

Broadjam Artist: Michael Centola (20 Minute Mission)
Song: Beautiful Day

Reviewer: paul sandberg

Positive Comments: enjoyed the sentiments of the lyrics and the overall simplicity of the song – nice lil breakdown change as wellrecording is just fine, just enough reverb to accentuate the lower register vocals.I can surely hear this being played on a TV show.

Constructive Comments: at the 1:40 mark “Who knows what tomorrow may bring” sound like you were tripping over the lyrics – perhaps give that line another run.Overall the melody is somewhat suspect – either you by choice ended phrases with a note that doesn’t fit the key, or you just sang it incorrectly – regardless it’s a bit disconcerting, especially when half the time you hit it right.if you just clean up those two things, this could have a def, quirky appeal that could get picked up.

Broadjam Artist: Delta Burnett Reed
Song: Erie Canal

Reviewer: Michael Jones

Positive Comments: The lyrics are very fitting to the sound. This song has a very traditional folk feel as though from the 1800’s. This would be a fantastic song for a period movie.

Constructive Comments: The variation at the end is excellent. For what the song is I woudn’t change anything.

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: KEEPING SECRETS (Emma Jane)

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nicely crafted piece that is chocked full of truth and soul. Very intriguing voice. I hear a little Dolly Parton in it. Nice arrangement. Certainly a theme that many could identify with, yet done with a lot of originality.

Constructive Comments: Really nice piece.

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Seeing Through His Pain (Rock – Roots Rock, Country – Alternati)

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very soulful and moving piece that is very well instrumented. I think this works very well kept as an acoustic number. Vocals are very bold and expressive. Very creative piece.

Constructive Comments: Really good job. I wouldn’t change a thing.

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Too Hep For the Room Coreys

Reviewer: Sam Cooper

Positive Comments: I hear influences from the 80’s and 90’s.

Constructive Comments: Maybe a good mastering engineer could give this a slight kick in the butt?