Broadjam Artist: Michael Centola (20 Minute Mission)
Song: Beautiful Day
Reviewer: paul sandberg
Positive Comments: enjoyed the sentiments of the lyrics and the overall simplicity of the song – nice lil breakdown change as wellrecording is just fine, just enough reverb to accentuate the lower register vocals.I can surely hear this being played on a TV show.
Constructive Comments: at the 1:40 mark “Who knows what tomorrow may bring” sound like you were tripping over the lyrics – perhaps give that line another run.Overall the melody is somewhat suspect – either you by choice ended phrases with a note that doesn’t fit the key, or you just sang it incorrectly – regardless it’s a bit disconcerting, especially when half the time you hit it right.if you just clean up those two things, this could have a def, quirky appeal that could get picked up.