Broadjam Artist: Noreen Inglesi
Song: From The Eyes of A Child
Reviewer: John Walradt
Positive Comments: Very good studio and recording skills. Vocals are energetic, operatic, and angelic. Lyrically refreshing leaning more toward New Age than pop. It sounds experimental and that’s a good thing to do.
Constructive Comments: The most overall thing I noticed is its choppiness, especially with echoed words and the uneven arrangement. More single vocal with smaller parts of harmony and bridging the notes rather than almost randomly chopping them up might pull it together. There really isn’t a hook, nothing unique I can remember in the melody. You’ve got the recording skills, more so than I can hope to have, and I think you could do well to strip down and smoothen the arrangement.