Month: November 2018

Broadjam Artist: Teri Feaser
Song: Hungry Child

Reviewer: 3Mind Blight

Positive Comments: This song remindedme of a rush type song. Classic rock maybe. The used of the double vocals adlibs etc was cool. The quality of the recording needs a lot of work but I can see the potential of the song lyric wise.

Constructive Comments: The fuzz/static in the recording can be removed with Izotope RX. This is a must if the song is going to be used in todays market. Overall the song has potential and a lot of it sounded good. Keep up the good work and find an engineer to redo the background etc and the song would work for a lot of things.

Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: Chicrazy

Reviewer: Teri Feaser

Positive Comments: Sweet!Great Tune

Constructive Comments: Very good!

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: She Can Fly

Reviewer: 3Mind Blight

Positive Comments: This song has a great deal of potential. I did not like the lead vocal very much as it was hard to determine what some of the words are but that is prob just my taste. The instrumentation was very good and on point. The adlib/background vocals were very pleasant and achieved what I feel the artist was going for. Overall the track was good and the recording quality was great and very well mastered.

Constructive Comments: The lead vocals could use a little work…maybe chorus or a double track to thicken etc. Overall this was a good track with great potential.The vibe of the song was very fluid and had a nice groove to it.

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: LOVE’S SO HARD TO FIND

Reviewer: Teri Feaser

Positive Comments: Michael McDonald on Broadjam!?

Constructive Comments: excellent have a feeling I know who this is

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Cowhick
Song: Rumbler

Reviewer: 3Mind Blight

Positive Comments: This reminds me of a song that would be used for a car ad or in a video game for a driving sim etc. With work and a little more change ups this could do very well with the TV/AD/Gaming market.

Constructive Comments: I would improve the overall sound quality and change the music up a little more…the drums and guitar progression etc..but overall it is well composed and with very little work needed..it could be a very good song for Tv work and the gaming industry.

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: That’s Rich

Reviewer: Jeff Ashbaker

Positive Comments: Great sounding guitar introduction, both the performance and the recording makes you want to hear the tale. The vocal is well suited to the song and is also performed with a very professional touch.I like the lyrical cadence use in the rhyming scheme. Lucky man, happy song. It is nice to hear the smiling in the music!!

Constructive Comments: The one man and one guitar performances are some of favorites, but I can’t help wondering what this would become with a full blown production behind it, then again it is pretty hard to beat just as it is.Very nice job and a wonderful listen.

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: Start With the Heart

Reviewer: Warren Hein

Positive Comments: unique guitar style, like the repeating cadence of this. vocally i dig your clarity of HEARING your lyrics–too many don’t do this anymore. the production is splendid here, the structure solid, i dig this tune, and Starts With The Heart better be the title, or i will hunt you down and have you change it…hope all is well Pete!

Constructive Comments: there aint nothing i can say to suggest improve this quality tune that is well produced, well performed, solid lyrics, great guitar work. sorry can’t give you a perfect score, because nothing’s perfect, but damn man this is close!

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Bees In A Jar/Too Much Violence

Reviewer: Teri Feaser

Positive Comments: Reminds me of the 80’s great dance number. Luv it

Constructive Comments: What is the effect you used on your voice? I need that!

Broadjam Artist: Tristyn Leach
Song: Forever Road

Reviewer: Warren Hein

Positive Comments: i’ve heard this–i like the cadence and the lyrics are solid, guitars just fine, would like to hear the lyrics a bit more clearly.

Constructive Comments: i’d (and no offense!) have someone else sing this, you are a bit off key mostly. need to clarify and UP FRONT the vocal/lyrics a bit more, as i’m having a hard time identifying some of the words, including what i think is your hook/title. but still a solid song, needs just a bit of polish. personally and no offense, i don’t appreciate many tunes with la la la’s as a main component, unless it’s way in the background. all the best to you as you continue–is there a competition this year?

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: About You

Reviewer: Warren Hein

Positive Comments: good production and band quality, sounds as good as a Greg song, same stylistically, but might be wrong. About You, good title/hook. the vocalist does a good job for you here. overall very nice work by you and the band.

Constructive Comments: not much i’d change (which is rare..LOL). solid song. one thing i might do is isolate the mouth harp a bit more, since i like it myself, and i can hear that it does a nice job…i’d also like to hear a few LESS instruments, or maybe just a piano version, slow it down, maybe cut it down a bit lyrically, and it MIGHT be more powerful song.