
Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Spanish Lullaby (ft. Alex Lomas & Peter Richmond)
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: That was excellent, great voice. Please keep that in mind when you read the critical comments. With something so good the critical comments have to be very nit-picky to be of any use to you.
Constructive Comments: As the arrangement is now, I thought the song could have ended at 3:00 or 3:18 and not lost anything. The energetic guitar that came after that point was good, in fact it was better then the earlier part like that that was in English. The second part that was in non-English (Spanish or Portuguese) was actually better then the English section. If it was me, I would replace the English energetic guitar part with the non-English part at the end and then make the song end at 3:18.