Month: September 2018

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: SHE COULD HAVE BEEN THE ONE

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Great strong vocals, and instrumentals. tempo’s right on.

Constructive Comments: It’s not that interesting of a story line. The story itself is just fine. Just nothing new and or exciting about it.Work on those lyrics. Good luck

Broadjam Artist: Wayne Ammons
Song: Just Friends

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: instrumentals, vocals tempo, all good. song feels good. It has potential.

Constructive Comments: The lyrics need a lot of work. The story is all over the place. no real flow. Good Luck Dale R.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: When I Think I Should Forgive You

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: The instrumentals and voice and tempo are fine. Nice Ballad

Constructive Comments: It doesn’t flow. What I mean is, First verse “tonight I’m angry. Last verse its all worked out well. Tonight? ?

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: When I Think I Should Forgive You

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: The instrumentals and voice and tempo are fine. Nice Ballad

Constructive Comments: It doesn’t flow. What I mean is, First verse “tonight I’m angry. Last verse its all worked out well. Tonight? ?

Broadjam Artist: Nick Coleman and Cole Crawford Hurst
Song: LOVE IS A BROKEN RECORD, LOVE IS A BUSTED RUDDER

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I love the sound of the guitar, very cool finger picking. The voice is very strong and passionate.

Constructive Comments: I like the song, very sad but very good – I would shorten this song down to 3 minutes for maximum impact and leave out the dishes. I would also change the hook to just simply “Love’s gone away”.

Broadjam Artist: Nick Coleman and Cole Crawford Hurst
Song: LOVE IS A BROKEN RECORD, LOVE IS A BUSTED RUDDER

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I love the sound of the guitar, very cool finger picking. The voice is very strong and passionate.

Constructive Comments: I like the song, very sad but very good – I would shorten this song down to 3 minutes for maximum impact and leave out the dishes. I would also change the hook to just simply “Love’s gone away”.

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: The Creator

Reviewer: Blob_B

Positive Comments: Fascinating song. I was in complete (rhythmic) confusion at the start and love the way it resolved down to a more conventional trance form with a feeling akin to many of the ‘chill out’ hits . Very clever selection of tome colours and the reverse/echo effects really worked well.That’s quite an intricate keyboard solo around 3minutes. I usually prefer definite endings but the way you dissolve into the echo works extremely well in this case.

Constructive Comments: I have only 1 ‘constructive’ comment. I cannot resolve the timing in the start of the song. I found this intriguing and was why I rate the song so highly but I don’t know what our peers will make of it, even though you are in the experimental category.The contrast of the start to the rest of the song really appeals to me. I’ve played it several times and am intrigued to check out your other submissions. Thanks foe letting me review your music and I wish you all good things.

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: The Creator

Reviewer: Blob_B

Positive Comments: Fascinating song. I was in complete (rhythmic) confusion at the start and love the way it resolved down to a more conventional trance form with a feeling akin to many of the ‘chill out’ hits . Very clever selection of tome colours and the reverse/echo effects really worked well.That’s quite an intricate keyboard solo around 3minutes. I usually prefer definite endings but the way you dissolve into the echo works extremely well in this case.

Constructive Comments: I have only 1 ‘constructive’ comment. I cannot resolve the timing in the start of the song. I found this intriguing and was why I rate the song so highly but I don’t know what our peers will make of it, even though you are in the experimental category.The contrast of the start to the rest of the song really appeals to me. I’ve played it several times and am intrigued to check out your other submissions. Thanks foe letting me review your music and I wish you all good things.

Broadjam Artist: Bobby Caputo
Song: A Hard Refrain

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Sounds like a Beautiful ballad. instrumentals, voice, tempo, all good. I like the hook too.

Constructive Comments: I would like the first two verses to say more than they do. Seems like we got into “The song remains the same” way before we ever really know what the “song” is, or was… Work on the first 2 verses.

Broadjam Artist: Bobby Caputo
Song: A Hard Refrain

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Sounds like a Beautiful ballad. instrumentals, voice, tempo, all good. I like the hook too.

Constructive Comments: I would like the first two verses to say more than they do. Seems like we got into “The song remains the same” way before we ever really know what the “song” is, or was… Work on the first 2 verses.