Month: September 2018

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: Lord reside with me

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: The song drags a little

Constructive Comments: Please post your lyrics. makes it much easier to review.Seems like this should be a cheerful song so Smile when you sing it. It will make it better

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: Lord reside with me

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: The song drags a little

Constructive Comments: Please post your lyrics. makes it much easier to review.Seems like this should be a cheerful song so Smile when you sing it. It will make it better

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: NEVER GONNA BE THE SAME

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Nice voice and instrumentals.

Constructive Comments: Please Post your lyrics so they can be viewed and better understood. Makes the review much easier. I’d have to go back and listen a few more times to give a better review but I don’t really want to because its not all that interesting

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: NEVER GONNA BE THE SAME

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Nice voice and instrumentals.

Constructive Comments: Please Post your lyrics so they can be viewed and better understood. Makes the review much easier. I’d have to go back and listen a few more times to give a better review but I don’t really want to because its not all that interesting

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Chicken in the Pan

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Nice voice and instrumentals and who doesn’t love chicken?

Constructive Comments: I find very little creativity in the lyrics. Just finding words that rhyme with each other is not enough to make an interesting story. I think you can do better. I have faith.Good luck Dale R.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Chicken in the Pan

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Nice voice and instrumentals and who doesn’t love chicken?

Constructive Comments: I find very little creativity in the lyrics. Just finding words that rhyme with each other is not enough to make an interesting story. I think you can do better. I have faith.Good luck Dale R.

Broadjam Artist: Buc Williams
Song: REAL DEAL

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: This has potential. The hook is great. The lyrics are close

Constructive Comments: The song doesn’t flow like it could. V 1 drags and should not. I would forget the “Pre Corus” Keep it quick.Try this I bet you’ve heard, every pick up line.From do you come here often, to what’s your sign.Well You won’t hear, that from me, cause I ain’t no wanna-a-be.I’m the real deal…….etc.Continue that way all the way through to keep the tempo interesting oh and change to Light me up watch me “glow”. Your getting lit up after all !Good Luck ! Dale Robbins

Broadjam Artist: Buc Williams
Song: REAL DEAL

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: This has potential. The hook is great. The lyrics are close

Constructive Comments: The song doesn’t flow like it could. V 1 drags and should not. I would forget the “Pre Corus” Keep it quick.Try this I bet you’ve heard, every pick up line.From do you come here often, to what’s your sign.Well You won’t hear, that from me, cause I ain’t no wanna-a-be.I’m the real deal…….etc.Continue that way all the way through to keep the tempo interesting oh and change to Light me up watch me “glow”. Your getting lit up after all !Good Luck ! Dale Robbins

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: Thank You For Breaking My Heart

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: The instrumentals are good, the voice is good too. I feel the premise of the song is good but the story is incomplete.

Constructive Comments: You’re singing about more than one person, someone who broke your heart 1st, but then your getting married? Seems like two songs here. not one.

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: Thank You For Breaking My Heart

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: The instrumentals are good, the voice is good too. I feel the premise of the song is good but the story is incomplete.

Constructive Comments: You’re singing about more than one person, someone who broke your heart 1st, but then your getting married? Seems like two songs here. not one.