Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Take Your Time
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The sax is really hot in this motivational (get you started in) love song. Lyrics urge listener to take a chance on love “this could be the first day of the rest of your life”, very encouraging lyrics. There’s also the escape clause if things don’t work out…an interesting twist in the song.
Constructive Comments: For some reason, it seemed like the lyrics/vocal were embattled with the instrumentation. They didn’t “match” to me. Maybe it’s just because I don’t “get” jazz.
Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Take Your Time
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The sax is really hot in this motivational (get you started in) love song. Lyrics urge listener to take a chance on love “this could be the first day of the rest of your life”, very encouraging lyrics. There’s also the escape clause if things don’t work out…an interesting twist in the song.
Constructive Comments: For some reason, it seemed like the lyrics/vocal were embattled with the instrumentation. They didn’t “match” to me. Maybe it’s just because I don’t “get” jazz.
Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Take Your Time
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The sax is really hot in this motivational (get you started in) love song. Lyrics urge listener to take a chance on love “this could be the first day of the rest of your life”, very encouraging lyrics. There’s also the escape clause if things don’t work out…an interesting twist in the song.
Constructive Comments: For some reason, it seemed like the lyrics/vocal were embattled with the instrumentation. They didn’t “match” to me. Maybe it’s just because I don’t “get” jazz.
Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Take Your Time
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The sax is really hot in this motivational (get you started in) love song. Lyrics urge listener to take a chance on love “this could be the first day of the rest of your life”, very encouraging lyrics. There’s also the escape clause if things don’t work out…an interesting twist in the song.
Constructive Comments: For some reason, it seemed like the lyrics/vocal were embattled with the instrumentation. They didn’t “match” to me. Maybe it’s just because I don’t “get” jazz.
Broadjam Artist: Randal DunkleSong: Jeanie (Ritchie/Dunkle)Reviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: If you are looking for a (frustrated) love song for a girl named Jeannie, well, here ya go. Nice instrumentation and production. Vocal is impassione…
Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie (Ritchie/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: If you are looking for a (frustrated) love song for a girl named Jeannie, well, here ya go. Nice instrumentation and production. Vocal is impassioned and believable.
Constructive Comments: Work on more originality in your lyric writing. (forever and always) Vocal sounds strained to me. Piano intro needs more variation. The effect on the vocal is overdone. Vary the first percussion loop.
Broadjam Artist: Randal DunkleSong: Jeanie (Ritchie/Dunkle)Reviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: If you are looking for a (frustrated) love song for a girl named Jeannie, well, here ya go. Nice instrumentation and production. Vocal is impassione…
Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie (Ritchie/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: If you are looking for a (frustrated) love song for a girl named Jeannie, well, here ya go. Nice instrumentation and production. Vocal is impassioned and believable.
Constructive Comments: Work on more originality in your lyric writing. (forever and always) Vocal sounds strained to me. Piano intro needs more variation. The effect on the vocal is overdone. Vary the first percussion loop.
Broadjam Artist: Hank ThomasSong: Skinny Dippin’ Clothes (Duet)Reviewer: RoosterPositive Comments: you’re on the right track. good feel to it. Constructive Comments: I think you have more verses than you need. because you have a decent hook. I would sh…
Broadjam Artist: Hank Thomas
Song: Skinny Dippin’ Clothes (Duet)
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: you’re on the right track. good feel to it.
Constructive Comments: I think you have more verses than you need. because you have a decent hook. I would shorten it up and perfect the best verses and get rid of the extra weight.Also Her pitch, (for the most part ) is not right for this song.Good Luck !
Broadjam Artist: Hank ThomasSong: Skinny Dippin’ Clothes (Duet)Reviewer: RoosterPositive Comments: you’re on the right track. good feel to it. Constructive Comments: I think you have more verses than you need. because you have a decent hook. I would sh…
Broadjam Artist: Hank Thomas
Song: Skinny Dippin’ Clothes (Duet)
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: you’re on the right track. good feel to it.
Constructive Comments: I think you have more verses than you need. because you have a decent hook. I would shorten it up and perfect the best verses and get rid of the extra weight.Also Her pitch, (for the most part ) is not right for this song.Good Luck !
Broadjam Artist: Nick BerrySong: EnoughReviewer: RoosterPositive Comments: Everything is good. Def has potential.Constructive Comments: There’s something about this line that needs work.One is never enough.When you’re getting drunk on love.Spending all…
Broadjam Artist: Nick Berry
Song: Enough
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: Everything is good. Def has potential.
Constructive Comments: There’s something about this line that needs work.One is never enough.When you’re getting drunk on love.Spending all your time,Tryin’ to mend your life.I can’t put my finger on it. but somethings not quite right.Good luck. its close !
Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Trouble Maker
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: Great instrumentals, & tempo, with strong vocals, and a good feel.
Constructive Comments: Please post your lyrics makes it much easier to review.Seems like You have two songs here. At first it sounds like the songs about a trouble maker and then one of a patriot. It’s confusing.
Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Trouble Maker
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: Great instrumentals, & tempo, with strong vocals, and a good feel.
Constructive Comments: Please post your lyrics makes it much easier to review.Seems like You have two songs here. At first it sounds like the songs about a trouble maker and then one of a patriot. It’s confusing.
Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Trouble Maker
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: Great instrumentals, & tempo, with strong vocals, and a good feel.
Constructive Comments: Please post your lyrics makes it much easier to review.Seems like You have two songs here. At first it sounds like the songs about a trouble maker and then one of a patriot. It’s confusing.
Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Trouble Maker
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: Great instrumentals, & tempo, with strong vocals, and a good feel.
Constructive Comments: Please post your lyrics makes it much easier to review.Seems like You have two songs here. At first it sounds like the songs about a trouble maker and then one of a patriot. It’s confusing.
Broadjam Artist: allison boltonSong: SHE COULD HAVE BEEN THE ONEReviewer: RoosterPositive Comments: Great strong vocals, and instrumentals. tempo’s right on. Constructive Comments: It’s not that interesting of a story line. The story itself is just fin…
Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: SHE COULD HAVE BEEN THE ONE
Reviewer: Rooster
Positive Comments: Great strong vocals, and instrumentals. tempo’s right on.
Constructive Comments: It’s not that interesting of a story line. The story itself is just fine. Just nothing new and or exciting about it.Work on those lyrics. Good luck