Month: September 2018

Broadjam Artist: David J. Hentosh
Song: I’m In Love With You

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: nice voice and good feel to this song. I like the hook I’m in love with you. But the rest doesn’t get me there.

Constructive Comments: Post your lyrics. It makes it a lot easier to review.I really like the hook “I’m in love with you”. But the rest doesn’t get me there. Lyrics need to reflect “WHY” your in love maybe?

Broadjam Artist: David J. Hentosh
Song: I’m In Love With You

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: nice voice and good feel to this song. I like the hook I’m in love with you. But the rest doesn’t get me there.

Constructive Comments: Post your lyrics. It makes it a lot easier to review.I really like the hook “I’m in love with you”. But the rest doesn’t get me there. Lyrics need to reflect “WHY” your in love maybe?

Broadjam Artist: Kaye Logan
Song: Ship Came In

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: It’s a nice feeling song with good strong vocals and instrumentals.

Constructive Comments: Post your lyrics. Much easier to review that way.Not bad just not great. So much talent out there, the lyrics must be dazzling and these are just not. Best wishes good luck have fun and hang in there!

Broadjam Artist: Kaye Logan
Song: Ship Came In

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: It’s a nice feeling song with good strong vocals and instrumentals.

Constructive Comments: Post your lyrics. Much easier to review that way.Not bad just not great. So much talent out there, the lyrics must be dazzling and these are just not. Best wishes good luck have fun and hang in there!

Broadjam Artist: Simon Finn
Song: Cyber Cowboy

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Carrie Underwood LOOK OUT ! Love your voice and the way this song is put together, I think is quite original.

Constructive Comments: I’m not crazy about the first two verses. Everything else I really love. I’d like it more if we could change these lyrics around some, i think. He won’t send a photoHe’s too discreetHe won’t give his numberBefore you meetYet here he is demandingPictures of your feet(Go figure)All on accountAt his grand hotelOne night onlyYou’re the clientele

Broadjam Artist: Simon Finn
Song: Cyber Cowboy

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Carrie Underwood LOOK OUT ! Love your voice and the way this song is put together, I think is quite original.

Constructive Comments: I’m not crazy about the first two verses. Everything else I really love. I’d like it more if we could change these lyrics around some, i think. He won’t send a photoHe’s too discreetHe won’t give his numberBefore you meetYet here he is demandingPictures of your feet(Go figure)All on accountAt his grand hotelOne night onlyYou’re the clientele

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: FREEDOM

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Sound like Tom Petty. Good rhythm and feel.

Constructive Comments: It’s not a very interesting story the way it’s told. seems like it could have more substance maybe?

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: FREEDOM

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Sound like Tom Petty. Good rhythm and feel.

Constructive Comments: It’s not a very interesting story the way it’s told. seems like it could have more substance maybe?

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Revolution

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Here’s a dynamic electronic piece with 4 sections. Someone had fun putting this together! It’s catchy, fun, high energy stuff and there are some pretty amazing keyboard licks in there.

Constructive Comments: I wasn’t sure how the differing sections were related to each other. They seemed so distinctively different. I didn’t rate the lyrics because I could not hear/understand them and they didn’t really show up on my computer screen when I clicked on lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Revolution

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Here’s a dynamic electronic piece with 4 sections. Someone had fun putting this together! It’s catchy, fun, high energy stuff and there are some pretty amazing keyboard licks in there.

Constructive Comments: I wasn’t sure how the differing sections were related to each other. They seemed so distinctively different. I didn’t rate the lyrics because I could not hear/understand them and they didn’t really show up on my computer screen when I clicked on lyrics.