Month: August 2018

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: FREEDOM

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: it had a good rock country groove, which is current for todays market. I really liked the chorus.

Constructive Comments: I would have liked to kwown a little more in the lyric, why was he running, and what did he do to be pursued by the police? I felt like it needed a little more to the story in the lyrics.The second verse realy says the same thing as the first, it would be nice for some clairty in that verse.The chorus is cool, but it needs a little more to the lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: FREEDOM

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: it had a good rock country groove, which is current for todays market. I really liked the chorus.

Constructive Comments: I would have liked to kwown a little more in the lyric, why was he running, and what did he do to be pursued by the police? I felt like it needed a little more to the story in the lyrics.The second verse realy says the same thing as the first, it would be nice for some clairty in that verse.The chorus is cool, but it needs a little more to the lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: KEEP MY DREAM ALIVE

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I liked the instruments in the begining, the harmonica sounds nice. This is a cool tradional country song, could see it being played in a country bar.

Constructive Comments: I would like to see another layer of a guitar lick in places, give it that layer upon layer sound. Good song.

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: KEEP MY DREAM ALIVE

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I liked the instruments in the begining, the harmonica sounds nice. This is a cool tradional country song, could see it being played in a country bar.

Constructive Comments: I would like to see another layer of a guitar lick in places, give it that layer upon layer sound. Good song.

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Heart Of Blue (Ritchie/Dunkle)

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I liked the emotion you put behind it, very touching. I thought it was a sweet song. A few little things will make the chorus pop a little. Good job.

Constructive Comments: I get what you trying to do with it, but you have I still and I’m still in almost every line, I think it needs a variation from what you Have in the chorus. Here in love with you, would work instead of I’m still in love with you. You have still in your chorus, so save that for the chorus.

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Heart Of Blue (Ritchie/Dunkle)

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I liked the emotion you put behind it, very touching. I thought it was a sweet song. A few little things will make the chorus pop a little. Good job.

Constructive Comments: I get what you trying to do with it, but you have I still and I’m still in almost every line, I think it needs a variation from what you Have in the chorus. Here in love with you, would work instead of I’m still in love with you. You have still in your chorus, so save that for the chorus.

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: watching over you

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: A very good message and a sad story about the ending of a loved ones life. I liked the sweet story you told in the lyrics. It’s pretty, it needs a few tweaks to be a realy good song. Great message.

Constructive Comments: I think it needed a little more instruments in places and the singing needs to be tuned a little. It needs a few tweaks, but could be great. I could see a female singing it also. Very sweet song.

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: watching over you

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: A very good message and a sad story about the ending of a loved ones life. I liked the sweet story you told in the lyrics. It’s pretty, it needs a few tweaks to be a realy good song. Great message.

Constructive Comments: I think it needed a little more instruments in places and the singing needs to be tuned a little. It needs a few tweaks, but could be great. I could see a female singing it also. Very sweet song.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: WOULDN’T LIFE BE EASY?

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I liked the message of the lyrics and it had a nice folk music feel. Nice little message song, I see it as Folk or Americana country.

Constructive Comments: The arrangement did not thrill me, some little changes in the melody around the chorus would give it a lift where it’s needed. The vocals were a little pitchy, but a good recording can even that out. It had a good message.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: WOULDN’T LIFE BE EASY?

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I liked the message of the lyrics and it had a nice folk music feel. Nice little message song, I see it as Folk or Americana country.

Constructive Comments: The arrangement did not thrill me, some little changes in the melody around the chorus would give it a lift where it’s needed. The vocals were a little pitchy, but a good recording can even that out. It had a good message.