FREEDOM by allison bolton

Broadjam Artist: allison boltonSong: FREEDOMReviewer: amy abernathyPositive Comments: it had a good rock country groove, which is current for todays market. I really liked the chorus.Constructive Comments: I would have liked to kwown a little more in t…

allison bolton

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: FREEDOM

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: it had a good rock country groove, which is current for todays market. I really liked the chorus.

Constructive Comments: I would have liked to kwown a little more in the lyric, why was he running, and what did he do to be pursued by the police? I felt like it needed a little more to the story in the lyrics.The second verse realy says the same thing as the first, it would be nice for some clairty in that verse.The chorus is cool, but it needs a little more to the lyrics.