Month: July 2018

Broadjam Artist: Flashlyte
Song: We meet on a future love song

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: I like the experimental approach.

Constructive Comments: The vocal pitch is off and not on key. The arrangement is very confusing and it was a very confusing experience listening to this song. This sounded like a sketch in need of fleshing out and proper arrangement. The recording quality is poor. This song is in need of a more structured approach (a beginning, middle and end and a narrative that makes sense). Right now it sounds very stream of consciuosness.

Broadjam Artist: Flashlyte
Song: We meet on a future love song

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: I like the experimental approach.

Constructive Comments: The vocal pitch is off and not on key. The arrangement is very confusing and it was a very confusing experience listening to this song. This sounded like a sketch in need of fleshing out and proper arrangement. The recording quality is poor. This song is in need of a more structured approach (a beginning, middle and end and a narrative that makes sense). Right now it sounds very stream of consciuosness.

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Close to the Line (Ft CoriAnder & Amy Reader)

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: I really like the vocal performance and the lyrics.

Constructive Comments: I was waiting for a climax/drop, but it never came. It would be so cool if there was a high energy Drop section that serves as the climax of the song.

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Close to the Line (Ft CoriAnder & Amy Reader)

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: I really like the vocal performance and the lyrics.

Constructive Comments: I was waiting for a climax/drop, but it never came. It would be so cool if there was a high energy Drop section that serves as the climax of the song.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Parrot Island

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: I could see this song being played at a beach resort of some sort…maybe Sandals? I like the use of field recordings.

Constructive Comments: I think the bass needs to be tamed a bit. Maybe being careful in the mid bass part of the frequency spectrum. The composition is very repetitive with very little variation.

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: The Creator

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: This could be good for a film score.

Constructive Comments: The kick and snare are buried in the mix and the Bass is the loudest element. Typically I like to mix with the kick and snare being the loudest elements and the sub bass about -6 below the kick and snare.

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: The Creator

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: This could be good for a film score.

Constructive Comments: The kick and snare are buried in the mix and the Bass is the loudest element. Typically I like to mix with the kick and snare being the loudest elements and the sub bass about -6 below the kick and snare.

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Executive Power Lunch

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: I like the variety and experimental mixture.

Constructive Comments: I think some of the mid bass may need some taming.

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Executive Power Lunch

Reviewer: Spiderhound

Positive Comments: I like the variety and experimental mixture.

Constructive Comments: I think some of the mid bass may need some taming.

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: No Illustrated Man

Reviewer: Ross Mabey

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Constructive Comments: