Month: December 2017

Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Lamplight

Reviewer: Jon Lyons, Song Writer and Performer

Positive Comments: I did like the catchy Chorus in your song. I also really liked the solo, was not expecting that to pop out like that, gave it a real good classic rock song. You have a good tone to your voice and kept very well in key throughout the entire song. I would call your vocals unique

Constructive Comments: Although I did like your vocals as well as liking the catchy chorus, I felt that the Lyrics became very repetitive. The repetitive lyrics can be ok in my opinion if the song is not to long and if the song has great dynamics with the tempo and intensity of the song. I feel if the song would have been a little more dynamic it would have surely gained higher marks from me. I happen to think dynamics is the biggest challenge in composing and recording music.

Broadjam Artist: Spider kiting
Song: Cool kids under the lights

Reviewer: Jon Lyons, Song Writer and Performer

Positive Comments: I gave the quality of Lyrics a 3 because I felt “Cool kids under the lights” was great and had so much potential in this being a great song. Your vocal pitch was right there, and you have a very cool sounding voice, reminiscent of Pink Floyd. I can totally hear something like this being played in some type of montage footage in a movie.

Constructive Comments: Some of what I like also had things I did not like so much. “cool kids under the lights” had so much room so much potential, but got old after a certain point, wish you had taken it a step further with the lyrics, so much room in this song. Sometimes I believe the lead guitar “solo” area of a song is unnecessarily long, and even some of the Greats don’t beat it into the ground. Your solo was very basic which is absolutely ok, but maybe got a little to lengthy further exposing the basic guitar. I think you could spend a little more time on this song, and it’s transitions and come up with something better if you choose to.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Out of the Gaze of the Evil Eye

Reviewer: Jon Lyons, Song Writer and Performer

Positive Comments: I found the lyrics to be catchy and easy to learn and sing along to. I felt a familiar flow that I also like in a CD Super Nova (Ray LaMontagne). The guitar riff was cool and raunchy which was a very cool sound at times

Constructive Comments: I felt the song kinda stayed in one gear along the journey, and never really built up to change gears. I really would have liked to have heard more dynamics in the song, something to look forward to, a journey on the song.

Broadjam Artist: Yung Proof
Song: Because I’m Brown

Reviewer: SeedMusikGroup

Positive Comments: Dope! I like it

Constructive Comments: keep working!, its dope

Broadjam Artist: 90ImFamou$
Song: So famous

Reviewer: SeedMusikGroup

Positive Comments: Dope!, I like it

Constructive Comments: Keep working

Broadjam Artist: Kevin Leon Smith
Song: Fangs

Reviewer: SeedMusikGroup

Positive Comments: you should submit this for a video game placement opportunity

Constructive Comments: keep at it, keep working

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Time Loom

Reviewer: Ben Green

Positive Comments: the song barebone shas potentiaal, brings back mewmories, has nice retro groove.

Constructive Comments: groove is repetitive, siounds like its pulled form an 80s sound track, the vocal are too low, and are pitchy, just needs to be redone and cleaned up. and cut, way too long for markets, does not switch up until 4 mins in!

Broadjam Artist: Ante Novaselic
Song: S.O.L.

Reviewer: Ben Green

Positive Comments: nice flow, chill and relaxing. liked the switch up, especially at the two minute mark.

Constructive Comments: not my genre but seems like the first melody switch was out of place and didnt fit smmothly like the second

Broadjam Artist: robert wesley
Song: Midnight Impulse

Reviewer: Ben Green

Positive Comments: litle difficult for me to rate just piano nas i dont lidsten to classical much

Constructive Comments: not sure what I was listening to, was this played or sequenced? i couldn’t tell

Broadjam Artist: Spider kiting
Song: Greentree

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I really like the arrangement and the lyrics are great, the voice is very unique and is very genuine. I love the drums as well.

Constructive Comments: Very good Rock & Roll song, I do think it has wonderful potential – it’s sounds like the end of this song has been cut off – please check because I’d still like to hear the ending – best wishes!