Broadjam Artist: Spider kiting
Song: Cool kids under the lights
Reviewer: Jon Lyons, Song Writer and Performer
Positive Comments: I gave the quality of Lyrics a 3 because I felt “Cool kids under the lights” was great and had so much potential in this being a great song. Your vocal pitch was right there, and you have a very cool sounding voice, reminiscent of Pink Floyd. I can totally hear something like this being played in some type of montage footage in a movie.
Constructive Comments: Some of what I like also had things I did not like so much. “cool kids under the lights” had so much room so much potential, but got old after a certain point, wish you had taken it a step further with the lyrics, so much room in this song. Sometimes I believe the lead guitar “solo” area of a song is unnecessarily long, and even some of the Greats don’t beat it into the ground. Your solo was very basic which is absolutely ok, but maybe got a little to lengthy further exposing the basic guitar. I think you could spend a little more time on this song, and it’s transitions and come up with something better if you choose to.