Month: August 2017

Broadjam Artist: Aaron Hamblin
Song: Never Alive

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: an obscure instrumental metal song. there are interesting guitar licks.

Constructive Comments: tends to be repetitive and then, predictable. there is something here, but needs work. like the end.

Broadjam Artist: Ali Edwards
Song: Junior B

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: Like this song a lot. kind of electro-pop with a reegae flavor. makes the song joyfull, danceable. Voice good and suitable for this song.good lyrics, instumentation effective.

Constructive Comments: my con would be the sound, it is a Little dull, compressed.

Broadjam Artist: Brenda Craven
Song: Brenda’s Swagger

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good overall production. the idea is good, the pace is good and there are interesting piano licks.

Constructive Comments: the song mantains inthe same level. percussion is always the same, no fills or changes. This makes the song predictable.

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: Beautiful Sound

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: This song has a spanish flavour, that gives its identity, with good guitar licks in that sense. Good lyrics, very good voice, denote passion and filling.

Constructive Comments: overall song is dull, kind of “dirty”, I think that needs a distinctive chorus which lacks. nevertheless I enjoyed and like the song.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: What You Do

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: The vocalist sounds a lot like Tom Petty. The vocals are delivered nicely – sonically mellow. A lot going on in this song instrument-wise, and they all collaborate well with each other.

Constructive Comments: I would keep this song as-is. It is a nice piece of work. Everything from the instruments to the vocals were nicely put together.

Broadjam Artist: tim meyers
Song: christmas is a treasure

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: This is a good Christmas song. Lyrics were in the spirit of the season and put together in holiday-esque fashion. The vocals themselves remind me of Idina Menzels voice (The movie Frozen – Let It Go).

Constructive Comments: I don’t have any suggestions for this song whatsoever. That is to say, in my opinion, the song doesn’t need any amending.

Broadjam Artist: Randy Calligan
Song: Pick Up My Heart And Go Home

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: Very nicely done. This quickly reminded me of something Alanis Morissette would sing. “Ain’t it funny how you hate yourself – Even when you’re all you’ve got? Like you should’ve been a whole lot more – but the truth is, you’re not”. That is a critical line in the song. Stings – in a good sense. Just well done all around.

Constructive Comments: This is a quality piece of music. The lyrics are the strongest piece of the song but the piano and strings play a huge part in bringing it all to a crescendo in the finale.

Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: i’ll take your heart with me

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: This is a very well put together song – from beginning to end. I will admit, I don’t listen to this genre of music often but, if I did, I could easily see this song in my playlist.

Constructive Comments: Everything I can hear on this song was done well. I wouldn’t change anything at all. Sonically, it an very easy song to listen to.

Broadjam Artist: Marcel
Song: Don’t let it get you down

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: it is always good to know Jesus will be around when we are down. an inspirational song for when we are feeling down. remins me of the Beatles song don”t let me down.

Constructive Comments: kyrics were very good. instrumentals were excellent. it is always good to know Jesus will be there when we are down. your song is another testiment to that fact. very well done.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Alleluia (To The One) – Julia Schmidt

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: giving praise to God for Jesus is inspirational. we should all be grateful for the birth of Christ. your song is a great credit to Jesus.

Constructive Comments: an inspirational song of Jesus is just what we need in this troubled world. more songs need to be written about Jesus. he maybe our only hope.