Month: August 2017

Broadjam Artist: Brenda Craven
Song: Holding On

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: vocals wer very good. instrumentals were good. very good inspirational song. strenght is what we all need from someone else.

Constructive Comments: it is always good to have strenght from someone else. inspirational songs are always good to hear. keep writing inspirational songs.

Broadjam Artist: Lisa Vivienne
Song: Tree of Life

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: remins me of the song saving grace. lyrics were excellent vocals were excellent. enjoyed the song very much.

Constructive Comments: we all need the help of someone else to get us through these most difficult years of our lives. the song was a positive inspiration for everyone. your song was the tree of inspiration for me.

Broadjam Artist: All Around
Song: Hold U ( Prod.By All Around)

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: This is a very well put together song! Made for radio. The delivery of the lyrics remind me of Nelly.

Constructive Comments: There isn’t anything I could add to this that would make it better without it being nit-picking. Finding the market/demographic for this should be easy. I can hear this being played on the radio without a doubt. If I had to add anything, it would simply be to push this as much as you can. The only way this doesn’t garner some attention is if the marketing-piece is lacking.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: America’s Heart

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: reminds me of the song God bless America. it incorporates religion and politics. a very good song overall. I was inspired by it.

Constructive Comments: good advice not to steal. our founding forefathers were the inspiration of how we should live today. this was a great patriotic song.

Broadjam Artist: Tristyn Leach
Song: Somehow, Someway

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: I liked the chorus vocal and the lyrics are good. had a cool 80’s vibe to it.

Constructive Comments: I would have liked to hear a bit more variance in the gtr track. other than that it was good work. thanks for the listen

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Shout To Jesus

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: instrumentals were excellent. reminds me of the music of jimmy Hendricks.

Constructive Comments: it is always a good idea to express yourself to Jesus. we all communicate to God in different ways. I guess the only thing that matters is you get your message to him.

Broadjam Artist: Jimmy Joe Lee
Song: The Coal Miner Song

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: Nicely done. This song is much like what you would hear at the end of an old western movie where the hero is about to part ways after having saved the town. Well put together.

Constructive Comments: This song was very nicely done. In the spirit of old country music where the vocal gives you vulnerability but the guitar makes you feel confident in your task. I can’t say that I would add or change anything.

Broadjam Artist: Floyd Kelly
Song: In my Time

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: This song is put together very well. The instruments play well off each other. The piano and strings give the feel that there is inspiration in the songs overall intent. I would place this song in the realm of a Chariots of Fire movie.

Constructive Comments: There isn’t much constructive feedback to add here. The song is well put together. There aren’t any areas I feel where the arrangement fails the project and in addition, there aren’t any areas where the quality or consistency fail to meet the agenda.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Slow Down

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: The feel of the song is in-line with Classic Rock. White Snake comes to mind. The song quality is nice. Especially when having multiple instruments involved and finding space for each to breath. The vocals sit nicely and do not clash with the instruments. The song concept is not unknown but, it still has an overall feel a classic rock audience would be in touch with.

Constructive Comments: Not much constructive feedback I can give here as the songs main parts (chorus, arrangement and song quality) are basically on point. If anything, I may give some of the vocal dubs a glance over. In some cases, they don’t sound as if they line up with the main vocal. Overall, nice song.

Broadjam Artist: Bonfire
Song: Not Open For Business Now

Reviewer: Jonah Wayz

Positive Comments: This song has potential to be something really good. The feel of the chords match the vocals. Chorus lines are more often than not the most important part of the song and in that sense, this song is on point.

Constructive Comments: It seems as if the vocals need a bit touching up from a clarity, quality and delivery aspect. I would first start off with delivery. Once you have mastered your delivery and can harness your vocal output, the clarity will improve. The quality will come when you go to mix and master. If possible, maybe look into a professional studio where the engineer can help with the overall quality of the project.