Broadjam Artist: Randy Calligan
Song: Moments Long Forgotten
Reviewer: Jimmy Joe Lee
Positive Comments: What did I like? The raspy quality of the performers voice and the mood of the recording. Your on the right track.
Constructive Comments: Theres’ much to work with here. To me, the song is too long. Perhaps it would be more accurate to say the recording is too long. Unless you have something exciting going on… 3 to 3.5 minutes is max. I couldn’t get the lyric picture straight. It was something about a school bus and reflections in the window. I like the idea, the imagery but couldn’t figure out if it was the singers daughter or ??? As I said I like the feel of the recording but it needs some polishing.