Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: chicago girl
Reviewer: Jimmy Joe Lee
Positive Comments: Let me say upfront that I dislike critiquing other songwriters. All of us are trying our damnedest to create good songs and having fun doing it. The instrumentation is good. I like the single line guitar fill the shows up two or three times. The words are clearly understood. The lyrics seem dated. I think of the 1967 hit “Georgy Girl” by the Australian group The Seekers. I’m not at all suggesting your song is a copy of that one. I just wanted to give you a frame of reference.
Constructive Comments: Aside from the dated aspect I mentioned above, I have a problem with the vocal quality of the performer. I don’t mean to be unkind but I must be honest. Being honest as to my thoughts, I hasten to add, doesn’t mean Im right.