Month: October 2016

Broadjam Artist: John Hazlett
Song: I’m So Sorry

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Nice song.

Constructive Comments: I wish there were lyrics for it.

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Chances

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Nice groove. Great work.

Constructive Comments: I wanted to lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: CALLING SUPERMAN

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Wow! Great song!!! I loved it.

Constructive Comments: It is great the way it is.

Broadjam Artist: Norb Studelska/Upper Air Disturbance
Song: No Net Down Below

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Very interesting idea. I really like the message.

Constructive Comments: I personally am not a fan of repetitive lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey
Song: On An Ordinary Tuesday 9/11

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Very good song. I really liked it.

Constructive Comments: I thought the acoustic guitar could have been a little louder.

Broadjam Artist: stefo
Song: i am stretched on your grave

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Very interesting song. Nice tune.

Constructive Comments: I had a little trouble relating to the lyrics. The rhyming seemed force to me in some places.

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: So Alone Tonight final rough

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: This is song is very original. Nice guitar work.

Constructive Comments: I found the tune and lyrics are somewhat unpredictable which is fine but make the song a little less enjoyable for me. Just my thoughts.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Can Anyone See

Reviewer: Bobby Caputo

Positive Comments: A real nice hook and a driving feel. “I’ve heard a lot of talkingBut I see more apathyEverybody’s gawking, baby but,Can anyone see”I think that was the best line of the song…rhyming with “gawking” without the word choking the meter was great.

Constructive Comments: Not exactly sure what you were trying to say…I get the hook, but I’m confused …is this a God song? What am I suppose to see? If I’m suppose to answer the question, then my answer is “yes”…I can see….do I win anything? Is this a Trump song?…still…I liked it…and can still hear the hook in my head.

Broadjam Artist: a man’s voyage
Song: Hold You Tight

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Wow! This is a great song. I love it!!!

Constructive Comments: My only suggestion is to get this song out there. I can hear it in a movie.

Broadjam Artist: LightFinger
Song: Leave A Light On

Reviewer: Bobby Caputo

Positive Comments: This song started with a whole lot of cool. Raspy vocal…good imagery in the bedroom..the chorus really brought life to the moody 1st verses…Really like the vocal work…really fit the mood..Instrumentation was real and honest…kinda garage band, but clean and tight. Overall I liked the song and the chorus is still in my head.

Constructive Comments: The vocal in the first verses is buried…had trouble making out what was being said…I listened again and still can’t make out what was happening here…the guy leaves…why?…driving down the road and thinking what she “just said”…thought she was asleep…anyway..it doesn’t matter a whole lot…I enjoyed it anyway…never been much for lyrics having to hit you in the face…good luck.