In Between by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: In BetweenReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: At first I thought this was going to be a song about Lewis and Clark trying to find the passageway, but it turned out to be a love-relationship song. Pleasant mal…

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: In Between

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: At first I thought this was going to be a song about Lewis and Clark trying to find the passageway, but it turned out to be a love-relationship song. Pleasant male vocal with nice female vocal harmony. Somehow the “usually trite” love/above rhyme really worked in this song without sounding over-used. It’s a nice love song and I wish you the best with it!

Constructive Comments: That was quite a leap from blue skies and bright eyes to the eating the cookie from the middle. But I guess you can say…it was an original leap. I’d shorten the guitar solo a bit…if you feel like shortening the song would help or make it more commercially acceptable….no big deal on that one. It was a nice guitar solo. So…was the cookie an Oreo?