Author: bjamreviews

Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: Headin’ Out West

Reviewer: Yuri

Positive Comments: A contemporary good, bad and ugly theme. Ennio Morricone would approve, I think.

Constructive Comments: I like it overall and have nothing in mind for improvements. Good luck!

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Only Hope full instrumental

Reviewer: Yuri

Positive Comments: Overall, well done. I imagine this track as background for a dramedy transition.

Constructive Comments: The quirky ending threw me off for a second, but then I felt that it could be used for an appropriate situation (i.e., something gone wrong). I suggest a more traditional ending, then throwing in your current ending as an alternative or, incorporating that mood shift somewhere in the middle as an editable part that could easily be cut out or usied separately. Good luck!

Broadjam Artist: Lyfe Concierge Publishing
Song: L Triumph

Reviewer: Yuri

Positive Comments: It has a generally good hook for a heroic theme.

Constructive Comments: What stands out immediately are the breaks between parts that are cutoff/edited obruptly. Work on making better transitions. The parts you have could use more variety in mood, buildup, and orchestration. Give the editor interesting options to work with. Finally, I believe that the track is too compressed overall for this type of music. Try not to lose too much of the dynamics of the orchestra. It’s a good start, though. Good luck!

Broadjam Artist: George Michael John
Song: God Rest You Merry Gentlemen

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Excellent for movies/TV!

Constructive Comments: Keep it! Don’t change a thing!

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: My Daddy’s Grave

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Nice lyrics and vocals! Very nice modern sound. Definitely fits in the Christian category. This one has some legs!

Constructive Comments: Maybe tighten up the cymbals. Take out some of the crash.

Broadjam Artist: Cannimagine Productions
Song: Momma Don’t Want

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Love the lyrics! Good simple story! Good fit for TV/Movies.

Constructive Comments: Might try adding some electric guitar. Give it a bit more grit to go with the lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: Ravensong
Song: The Picture on the Wall (Instrumental)

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Nice feel to the song. The solo guitar works well!

Constructive Comments: Possibly take some of the effects off the acoustic guitar to give it a more warm and natural feel. Piano instead of the synth might be nice.

Broadjam Artist: The Whythouse
Song: Fastlane

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Nice modern sound. I like the vocals and the rap style of the song!

Constructive Comments: Might want to try to remove the F Bombs to give it a bit more mainstream feel and appeal.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Bifocal Blues

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Fun song! Nice upbeat sound.

Constructive Comments: Possibly think about removing the talking parts. I think it would help the song flow better.

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: You’re Not Alone (vocal)

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: I like the theme of the song. Good instrumentation!

Constructive Comments: Sounds great. Possibly think about changing the sound of the electric solo and bringing the level up a bit. More to the front.