Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: Teaching The New Dog Old Tricks
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Interesting subject matter – teaching the old dog new tricks. Nice melody. Favorite rhymes: hips/tricks/back flips. Some really creative lyric writing here.
Constructive Comments: Please post the lyrics to your song. I had a hard time understanding all of them. Instrumentation sounded very “synthy” to me, which is okay for a demo. Some of the background vocals toward the end of the song need to be lined up a little more closely. Just a personal preference note: I didn’t like the comparison of the new dog being better than the old wife.