If Wishes were Horses by Ravensong

Broadjam Artist: RavensongSong: If Wishes were HorsesReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: This song has an ominous beginning. Nice guitar work. Loved the authenticity of the sound of the finger squeak on the strings. Nice use of common saying …

Ravensong

Broadjam Artist: Ravensong
Song: If Wishes were Horses

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This song has an ominous beginning. Nice guitar work. Loved the authenticity of the sound of the finger squeak on the strings. Nice use of common saying “If wishes were horses then beggars would ride.”

Constructive Comments: I had a hard time understanding your vocals. I had to look at the lyrics to comprehend your song. Work on vocal clarity and be sure your vocal is more up front in your mix. BTW Beggars is spelled with an A at the end.