Dramatic by Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Broadjam Artist: Oliver Keynes LafayeSong: DramaticReviewer: Diane RIDAEUSPositive Comments: The vibe really gets cooking as this track builds. I can envision many uses for the track but the strings at :43 are a bit distractive. There is no “hook” per …

Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Broadjam Artist: Oliver Keynes Lafaye
Song: Dramatic

Reviewer: Diane RIDAEUS

Positive Comments: The vibe really gets cooking as this track builds. I can envision many uses for the track but the strings at :43 are a bit distractive. There is no “hook” per se, which is appropriate for background music, but I would suggest varying the motif that repeats without change throughout the second half. Love the build though, and the energy.

Constructive Comments: The intro up to :21 is a bit sparse unless that was needed for the picture or scene, otherwise I would edit that out and start at :21 where the sounds are really warm and quite beautiful. I would have loved to hear some more authentic strings there at :43 because as a stand-alone instrument there or at least featured predominantly as they are, a more realistic sound would garner quite a bit more emotional impact.