Broadjam Artist: Lyfe Concierge Publishing
Song: L My Home
Reviewer: Nathan Totten
Positive Comments: Wow, love the guitar right away. Nice production 🙂 The vocal delivery is passionate and “broken”, which is very appropriate for this song.
Constructive Comments: Just a small thing (perhaps just a personal preference): the vocal when singing “Where is my home?” seems to peak a little bit. It might be the desired effect, but I’d like to hear it without the peak. The song might benefit from more changes or a bridge or chorus. I always write in 3 pieces (verse, chorus, bridge) so as to create anticipation, but that’s just one style of writing. This works very well as a low-key, tortured, emotional piece. It’s honest and raw 🙂