Broadjam Artist: Ravensong
Song: Picture on the Wall
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The poignant sadness of losing a lover comes through brilliantly in this song…you can hear it in the passion-infused vocals. Best instrumentation featured is the guitar – solid and great sounding. Love the vocal harmonies. Effective lyric writing with the picture on the wall (v1) and returning to it in the last verse. Nice rise on the vocal near the end.
Constructive Comments: The synth sounds cheesy to me on this song, as does the canned rhythm beat. Introduction is too long. Work on breath control. There were a couple of times I noticed you took a breath when you should have been able to sustain it through the phrase. The ending needs a “real ending”. Sorry to be so critical, but I really did like your song! I just think it needs some work. Please post the lyrics to your song.