May the Fourth Be….. by jim Finan

Broadjam Artist: jim FinanSong: May the Fourth Be…..Reviewer: Warren HeinPositive Comments: nice melody concept. good attempt at building the song.Constructive Comments: what really hurts this is the very synth-y sound, the instruments just don’t com…

jim Finan

Broadjam Artist: jim Finan
Song: May the Fourth Be…..

Reviewer: Warren Hein

Positive Comments: nice melody concept. good attempt at building the song.

Constructive Comments: what really hurts this is the very synth-y sound, the instruments just don’t come through as realistic, but i did enjoy the melodic structure. the “dark” section at about 1:50 didn’t seem to fit the vibe/musical concept. the piece is a bit long for placement IMO. kudos on your effort here.