Broadjam Artist: Will Sims
Song: Will You Remember?
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Here is a different kind of break up song. Great intro with innovative piano licks, drums kicking in provides an anticipatory vibe that introduces the song well. The repetitive questions (Do you remember) are very effective. The emotion and angst really come through the vocals. The rhymes/lyrics are very carefully written and emotionally delivered by the singer. I like the way he used the “ing” words, very effective. Also loved the piano arpeggios! The “I want to” section at the end is a great confession and conclusion to the song. Forgive and forget…but will he be able to?
Constructive Comments: Please post the lyrics to your song. So in the verse about the girl, why were you not listening? Why were her eyes shining? (That seemed like a positive word picture and I wasn’t quite sure how that meshed with the story).