Doing Business by Greg Lambert

Broadjam Artist: Greg LambertSong: Doing BusinessReviewer: Will SimsPositive Comments: This is a solid track in both writing and recording quality. It doesn’t sound like there was much production done in terms of building the song in the studio. It sou…

Greg Lambert

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: Doing Business

Reviewer: Will Sims

Positive Comments: This is a solid track in both writing and recording quality. It doesn’t sound like there was much production done in terms of building the song in the studio. It sounds like a rock song a bunch of great musicians wrote in a room together which is a feeling you don’t get a lot these days. Guitars, Harmonica, Banging drums, this is a full on rock song and I dig it.

Constructive Comments: When I said the song sounded like it didn’t have a lot of production, I was mostly referring to vocals. The Vocalist sounds good, the recording is pretty solid, but there chorus is so close to just hooking you in but it feels like it’s missing something that really gets “Doin Business” stuck in your head. It could be some sort of change in the music, added harmonies, or just something with the vocal melody that gives it a little more energy. This is really a nitpick because it’s a solid song off the bat. I did find myself wanting the hook the jump out at me a little more.

A List to be Mislaid by Scott Tingley

Broadjam Artist: Scott TingleySong: A List to be MislaidReviewer: Will SimsPositive Comments: Sounds like a very well produced and mixed track. This sounds great. The vocal choir parts sound really great and really bring the track up. Lead guitar parts…

Scott Tingley

Broadjam Artist: Scott Tingley
Song: A List to be Mislaid

Reviewer: Will Sims

Positive Comments: Sounds like a very well produced and mixed track. This sounds great. The vocal choir parts sound really great and really bring the track up. Lead guitar parts sound really well played and fill out the track nicely with the lack of vocals. Acoustic guitar sounds great as well. Very nice work on this song. Could hear this in a movie or TV show as like a theme or traveling, being on the road, or moving on with life in general.

Constructive Comments: Not a lot of bad things to say, I was confused that there was text in the lyrics section but I didn’t make out any words in the actual song. Just the vocal choir singing through out. Regardless you can do a lot with an instrumental track. There’s always little tweaks and small changes you can make to improve your writing but if you’re putting out stuff like this, just keep at it and you’ll be fine.

Leiza Michaels – 01. Movin’ Too Slow by StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecordsSong: Leiza Michaels – 01. Movin’ Too SlowReviewer: Bill DakePositive Comments: Nice little jazz tune with a definite nightclub feel. Fun lyrics, a little scatting, fine vocal and a tight/tasty back-up combo. Waiter, a…

StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: Leiza Michaels – 01. Movin’ Too Slow

Reviewer: Bill Dake

Positive Comments: Nice little jazz tune with a definite nightclub feel. Fun lyrics, a little scatting, fine vocal and a tight/tasty back-up combo. Waiter, another round…

Constructive Comments: Can’t think of a thing to add. Well done.

Don Juan Triumphant by Ravensong

Broadjam Artist: RavensongSong: Don Juan TriumphantReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: This sounds like it might be a vintage piece. I like the organ part the best. Very upbeat song that builds nicely. It has a positive and energetic feel to …

Ravensong

Broadjam Artist: Ravensong
Song: Don Juan Triumphant

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This sounds like it might be a vintage piece. I like the organ part the best. Very upbeat song that builds nicely. It has a positive and energetic feel to it. Nice fade on the ending.

Constructive Comments: What makes gothic rock gothic rock? Drum beat sounds like a loop with no variation. Sorry this is out of my genre.

Pretty Mess by Tony Tersmette

Broadjam Artist: Tony TersmetteSong: Pretty MessReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: This interesting composition seems to have a few sections from high energy to mellow. I especially liked the ending. Some very skillful playing is exhibited he…

Tony Tersmette

Broadjam Artist: Tony Tersmette
Song: Pretty Mess

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This interesting composition seems to have a few sections from high energy to mellow. I especially liked the ending. Some very skillful playing is exhibited here and definitely a lot of imagination.

Constructive Comments: Sorry this is way out of my genre. Keep making great music!

Pretty Mess by Tony Tersmette

Broadjam Artist: Tony TersmetteSong: Pretty MessReviewer: Hartmut OberdieckPositive Comments: A nice piece of music. Very groovy. Instruments played very well and precisely. Very varied. High musical understanding.Constructive Comments: This is now gru…

Tony Tersmette

Broadjam Artist: Tony Tersmette
Song: Pretty Mess

Reviewer: Hartmut Oberdieck

Positive Comments: A nice piece of music. Very groovy. Instruments played very well and precisely. Very varied. High musical understanding.

Constructive Comments: This is now grumbling at a high level. I’m missing the red thread a little. And a melody or solo part. But maybe that’s not the intent. In any case, a very good job that you don’t often find here