
Broadjam Artist: Ravensong
Song: Renfield’s Dream
Reviewer: Ash Black
Positive Comments: A haunting effort with earnest guitar work, this track pulls from a variety of post-punk and dark wave/goth elements. Notably: Red Lorry Yellow Lorry/Gang Of Four/The Cure. Cheers!
Constructive Comments: Despite the nice technical guitar work, the mix is dominated by the enduring loudness of the lead guitar all to the sufferance of the complimentary elements. Drums need to be miked and “seated” within the track properly. Bass is nonexistent except for it following the phrases. A climbing chord progression in the break/bridge would add much needed contra-position to the steady stream diminished key and tone of arrangement.