Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: You Built Another Ghost (acoustic)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Very original song expressing the disillusionment of a cast off lover. The lyrics are extremely clever and original, keeping the ghost metaphor consistent through the whole song. Love the reference to walking through walls. “What you lacked in honesty I lacked in confidence” another great line. This song is a good warning to check out the reputation of someone before you get deeply involved with him/her. Excellent vocals, instrumentation, mix and production values.
Constructive Comments: Even though it was a female vocal, my first thought when I heard the beginning that this is a Warren Hein song. Singular writing!Problematic lyric: Your reputation proceeded me. Usually people would say “his/her reputation preceded him” in other words, went before him. Gave a warning. But when you say proceeded me, to me that doesn’t make sense.