
Broadjam Artist: jim Finan
Song: Crisp
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Here’s a very interesting classical/electronic piece with different sections/movements that keep the listener wondering what he/she will hear next. It’s amazing all that the artist comes up with soundwise on the midi on this piece
Constructive Comments: 2:26 area – I am not fond of this section because of the “skippy” sound of it. Work on cohesiveness and congruity. Work on a memorable hook. You are all over the place…where are you going? What kind of mood are you trying to convey? Or are you just noodling? Keep in mind that this is not my genre, so I apologize if I am off base.