Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: Someplace I Don’t know
Reviewer: John Walradt
Positive Comments: What’s that coming towards you, as if looking towards a storm coming in, or maybe it’s a dream? The lovely, haunting melody is the first thing that captured my attention…the light keys and faint strings, like the voices of sirens calling. Then low rumble of keyboards! It stirs up something emotional, and that’s what melodies like this are meant to do! If I was producing a movie that needed an emotional background, this is what I would listen for.
Constructive Comments: You have a lovely, haunting melody so you really have something to work with, so high scores all around! Now, a few personal ideas perhaps to experiment with…I would start the melody at :15 instead of waiting for it. How about a smoother transition at 1:03 and 2:29? It begins faint and hauntingly beautiful. It feels like it could continue to build up gradually to full orchestration with a heavy piano after the nice break after 1:46. It seems unfinished but seems like there could be a possibility of brilliance towards the end, then back to the faint intro for about 15 seconds.